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Re: Warriors Fanfic
It's very short, but I want to keep track of it, so I'm posting it here. No remarks on how short it is, please. I've written it about five times, ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: Legend of Zelda: The Wings of Darkness
It gets a little confusing with the Dragoon AND the Dragon. I can't seem to keep track of them. Let's just say, Dragoon and Dragon don't belong in the same ...
Oct 1, 2008 -
Re: What's your strongest element?
I basically write fanfic. *glares* You forgot to put that up.
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: Are you writing a novel right now?
I'm writing a Warrior Cats fanfic. It's basically a follow up of Outcast, but from the Tribe Cats point of view. I came up with names, and I'm basically writing ...
Sep 14, 2008 -
Re: California Dreaming - Photoshop
You drew that?!?!? AWESOME!!! (sorry for the caps.) I wish I could draw like that. That's totally amazing!
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: Wolves!
I just HAD to post these. These are drawings ! (They're not mine, of course. I still like them though.) I can't get them to show up, so I'm giving ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: Flashback of a Bullied Girl
This is really good, considering it's a draft. Like chocoholic said, it's a bit rushed. Also, this sentence needs to be fixed. lying long time It should be "lying a ...
Aug 30, 2008 -
Re: Vashoa's Life
But pa hadn't. hadn't what? "Come?" You probably missed a part in the story. Spring had come at last, much to everybody's relief. But pa hadn't. Here it's saying that ...
Aug 15, 2008 -
Re: Silver Flame
Awesome, Kyte! I love this piece, though I wonder the same as everyone else: where's the rest? Flickering embers made shadows of his features. I'm not sure this part makes ...
Jul 19, 2008 -
Re: A Redwall FanFic
Thanks, I'll add in more A.S.A.P. I'll pm you when I've added it. Should I add the action or dialogue/character entry before or after the entry? As for the beginning, ...
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: A Redwall FanFic
I can't think of a name, so if you have suggestions, please post them. Anyway, here's to Redwall! :D Chapter One From the diary of Deidan, historian and recorder of ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Winter Wonder
My mom wrote this in High School, it's a free style poem, only three lines though. I really like it. Snow blankets the landscape. Rabbit tracks hop across the forest ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Warriors Fanfic: Shrouded Sun Chapter 5
Nice, like the rest of the story. Not really anything that needs to be fixed, except for the part when Brightpaw helped carry Sunpaw. Looking forward to the rest, PM ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: True Clans
Very interesting. I too love the series, and this sounds promising. Can't wait to read the story! :D I just might write my own Warriors fanfic, since some people other ...
Jun 25, 2008 -
Re: Novel: 1 Chaper: Proluge
With some work, I think this story could be very good. I'll point out the thing you probably should change, and then the things you should definitely keep. Wintermoon glanced ...
Jun 18, 2008
